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Attention bdsm fans! - I need advice for my story!?

For those of you who have not read my recent question....I'm writing an adult story. (just taking ideas out of my head and putting them on paper really) It is from a first person point of view about a girl who meets a guy in a coffee shop. He asks her on a date and things get steamy. He turns out to be into the bdsm thing. the girl isn't sure about it at first but soon learns that she kind of likes it. below and behold, the guy turns out to be the owner of the huge company that she works for. He "forces" her to take a promotion and become his secretary. I'm to the part where he is going over his own set of rules for her. I've got dress code, and Morning and lunch time duties. I need at least one more rule. (NOTE: I AM NOT SUBMITTING THIS FOR EDITING OR PUBLISHING. PLEASE DO NOT TELL ME WHAT NOT TO INCLUDE, OR THAT FEMINISTS MAY NOT LIKE IT. I AM FEMALE AND I DO LIKE IT. IT IS MY PREFERENCE SO GET OVER IT.) Yes if you would like, I am willing to let you read it. I allow people to contact me via email (which is not displayed) or IM. I'm rarely on IM but when I am, I'm invisible. You can try IM first and if you get no response just email me. You should get a responce within 24 hours that way I agree that the brief discription that I have provided here does make it sound like the "secretary." I am taking a few ideas from that movie but a very minimal amount. If you read the story, you will not see much resemblance if any. I'm trying to make it a little longer than just a short story and I've got lots of ideas for twists and turns, but I'm very open minded and I like to hear suggestions from other people. My idea might sound good or okay but somebody else's idea could just make the story. I would make certain to give them full credit if it did!

Public Comments

1. for rules you could add how she should greet him or how should she treat others... If i am able i wouldnt mind reading this story
2. "overtime" hours
3. This sounds a lot like the short story "Secretary" from the book "Bad Behavior" by Mary Gaitskill. Which was made into the movie "Secretary" in 2002. Maybe you already know that story, just giving you a heads up incase you don't. Maybe you'll want to read it or watch the movie if you haven't already; then again, maybe you wouldn't. You wouldn't want to subconsciously take ideas from her story. But that's not what you asked; I don't know how strict you want this Dom to be, but here are some rules that i use: i will never look into the eyes of my Master without his permission my head must be bowed down in the presence of my Master unless i am given permission to do so otherwise my eyes must be cast down in the presence of my Master unless i am given permission to do so otherwise Whenever Master speaks, even when i am speaking, i am to immediately become silent